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Larry Hogue's avatar

Nice twist for both characters!

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Larry Hogue's avatar

I also liked the intrusive narrator at the beginning. And you said it’s not a literary story!

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Mark Hannam's avatar

I remember a time when “meta” was not just a stupid name for Facebook!

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S..'s avatar

Plot twist!

Im just happy to not have to think for myself

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Mark Hannam's avatar

Amen to that!

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Steven Dettwyler's avatar

I went back and read part 2 again, really am enjoying this set. Thanks

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Mark Hannam's avatar

Thanks! The last part was easy to think of, but no so easy to go through with!

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Steven Dettwyler's avatar

Great stuff.

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